short story 2

Reflection- Although workshopped over zoom, I’m happy with the feedback I was given during the time my story was worked on. I believe the intent for my story was well understood and was portrayed in the way I expected. The idea of writing about a main character who of which is highly unliked by the reader is something relatively uncommon. At least to my knowledge. To take on a character with that role was something I enjoyed during the time I was writing it. However with this being a rough draft, there is a lot of room for improvement and revision. My story ultimately only took on the perspective of one character and with some feedback, I agree more perspective to the story needs to be given. There was also little confrontation within my story, so other feedback I was given was to add more conflict and is something I will add as I continue to work on and develop the story I have written.